First off, what's with this number stuff? I'm bad at math. Anyway, sounds like a good show. I can't even remember the last time I saw a good play. Maybe I need to write one. Better call Ben.
In many other instances, asphalt driveway printed in the script would not have read as naturally, and she would have delivered a line with the exact amount of sarcasm, impatience, or whatever else may have been used.